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--- settings:cahyali:factions [2021/02/22 23:09] – eliu
+++ settings:cahyali:factions [2021/04/04 14:37] – [Oxis Alliance] eliu
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 **Raphael Mystíc**, the Guiding Hand of Arenti, headmaster of the Arenti School of Arts, famous for mentoring the best artists and musicians of Cahyali.
-**Kura Tansei**, the Guiding Hand of Shinneok, overseer of the Heiwa botanical gardens, famous for helping troubled citizens find self-discovery.
+**Akē Jinhan**, the head advisor of **Kura Tansei**, who was the Guiding Hand of Shinneok before being assassinated at the Mid-Akvofojo festival of 10078 SF (date translated to Jaernian since founding for ease). Unlike his predecessor, Jinhan believes that Shinneok needs to establish itself in the world of Cahyali more, rather than be simply a source of labor and resources.
 == Heraldry ==
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 ==== Harena Trade Union of Cahyali (HTUC) ====
-The Harena Trade Union of Cahyali (HTUC) is a purely mercantile and commercial organization, dedicated above all else to the gaining of material profit. They seek only to expand their influence throughout the monetary sphere to control and monetize any commodity. Thye do not shy away from shady deals or illicit bargaining to get what they want.
+The Harena Trade Union of Cahyali (HTUC) is a purely mercantile and commercial organization, dedicated above all else to the gaining of material profit. They seek only to expand their influence throughout the monetary sphere to control and monetize any commodity. They do not shy away from shady deals or illicit bargaining to get what they want.
 The members of the HTUC venture out to become wealthy, or to be the first to find new items and commodities to be able to sell to the highest bidder. The members are masters in the art of deception and persuasion, silver-tongued to talk their way out of dangerous situations.
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 == Leaders ==
-The HTUC is run by the ruling families of Ley’Ork’s economy, including the Tàkeau family which controls history and the educational system, the Vane family which controls the military-industrial complex, Dævian family that controls the technological sector, and the Wren family that controls the red light districts and criminal underworld of Ley’Ork.
+The HTUC is run by the ruling families of Ley’Ork’s economy, including the Tàkeau family which controls history and the educational system, the Vane family which controls the military-industrial complex, Dævian family that controls the technological sector, the Wren family that controls the red light districts and criminal underworld of Ley’Ork, and the Berns family that controls the energy and power management of the country.
 == Heraldry ==
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 == Leaders ==
-The leaders are the five high council members of Ruefang and the archmage of the Ulos magic circle. They all hold equal positions, and serve more as examples and actual leaders.
+The leaders are the five high council members of Ruefang and the archmage of the Ulos Magic Circle. They all hold equal positions, and serve more as examples and actual leaders.
 == Heraldry ==