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 ====General City Description====
-Markdak is what you might expect of a port town run by scoundrels, ruffians, and other members of societies underbelly. It's streets are poorly cobbled, often dotted with potholes and several sections with dirt paths to show where development hadn't gotten even that far. It's buildings range from the most ramshackle of sheds one could find, located in the outskirts of the city, to a few larger and, by comparison, extravagant houses scattered around the city center. These larger buildings, of course, belong to the various privateer captains that call the port home. Throughout the city one could find all manor of seedy practices, from gambling dens, to brothels, to more inns, taverns, and bars than one would expect to find in a city of this size. The layout of buildings around the city center is at best disorderly, which quickly devolves to haphazard as you head towards the edge of town. The town hall is currently the largest building in town. It stands at three stories tall, and is one of the few buildings made of stone.
+Markdak is what you might expect of a port town run by scoundrels, ruffians, and other members of societies underbelly. It's streets are poorly cobbled, often dotted with potholes and several sections with dirt paths that show where development is lacking. It's buildings range from the most ramshackle of sheds one could find, located in the outskirts of the city, to a few larger and, by comparison, extravagant houses scattered around the city center. This is changing somewhat, as the new government has been trying to improve the quality of life in the city. The larger buildings, of course, belong to the various privateer captains that call the port home. Throughout the city one could find all manor of seedy practices, from gambling dens, to brothels, to more inns, taverns, and bars than one would expect to find in a city of this size. The layout of buildings around the city center is at best disorderly, which quickly devolves to haphazard as you head towards the edge of town. The town hall is currently the largest building in town. It stands at three stories tall, and is one of the few buildings made of stone.
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 ====Town Hall====
-No longer and empty seat, this place now houses the Tribunal of Captains, and is the seat of power for this city. People bring their issues here to be dealt with by the mayor, who decides if an issue is something to be dealt with immediately or to be brought to the next meeting.
+No longer an empty seat, this place now houses the Tribunal of Captains, and is the seat of power for this city. People bring their issues here to be dealt with by the mayor, who decides if an issue is something to be dealt with immediately or to be brought to the next meeting.
 ====City Guard House====