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 === Minogawa, Kurodaichi, Nakano ===
-Three towns located within the northwest that extend south, with the end being Nakano. These towns are heavily military based, constantly housing troops from the Shogunate military. Troops from through the Raikougan often train here, making these towns highly relevant to military matters.
+Three towns located within the northwest that extend southward. These towns are heavily military based, constantly housing troops from the Shogunate military. Troops from through the Raikougan often train here, making these towns highly relevant to military matters.
 === Village of the Yorukitsune ===
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 Their fall from grace came from a duel over the warlordship between the Kentaros. The head of the Raiden family of the time, Raiden Noboru, was defeated in a duel with both Kentaro Ryuji and Kentaro Oza. His defeat at the time came as a shock to many.
-The Raiden family of today are textile workers, and they own a reputable business in the heart of Youtai.
+The Raiden family of today are clothiers and tailors, and they own a reputable business in the heart of Youtai.
 //Please consult David Erb (@name6092) for matters pertaining to the Raidens.//