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 =====Fadencrest=====
 ====Overview====
-Fadenwood is a country town nestled in a mountain valley in central Ageron. Farms along the valley river and the iron mine in town provide most of the business but the EBL provides for the more niche needs of Ageron not usually accommodated in larger cities. The Followers of em tend to ward off any influx of outsiders due to their unusual behavior and appearance, affording a more private setting. The town does not have any government and instead has a more communal worldview than most.
+Fadenwood is a central-Ageronian country town nestled in a mountain valley. Farms along the valley river and the iron mine in town provide most of the business, but the EBL provides for the more niche needs of Ageron not usually accommodated in larger cities. The Followers of Em tend to ward off any influx of outsiders due to their unusual behavior and appearance, affording a more private setting. The town does not have any government; it instead has a more communal worldview than most.
 ====City Factions====
 ===The Followers of Emizzar===
-The first and oldest faction of Fadenwood, the followers of Emizzar (Em) are the backbone to this towns operation. Those who follow this faith are hiveminded and have no structure or hierarchy and acting as a single entity at times, generally orchestrating the towns actions. Individuality is still preserved for each follower but they orchestrate there work telepathically throughout the town. They are the cause of the odd manner in which things are not bought and sold in town but are freely used by the towns inhabitants as long as they also contribute to the towns survival.
+The first and oldest faction of Fadenwood, the followers of Emizzar (Em), are the backbone to this town's operation. Those who follow this faith are hiveminded, have no structure or hierarchy, and act as a single entity at times, generally orchestrating the towns actions. Individuality is still preserved for each follower, but they orchestrate their work telepathically throughout the town. Instead of buying and selling goods and services within the town, inhabitants freely exchange them to contribute to the town's general welfare.
-The practices of the followers of em are strange to say the least. Considered drug addicts by most people, they ritualistically harvest a strange metal that lands throughout the region during the nearly weekly meteor showers that happen over the valley, the metal is both used for worship and consumed in a powder to get “closer to em”. This metal when consumed causes the user to have visions and night terrors at night, followed by eventual development of the hive mind and occasional mutations of the body. The visions are considered gifts from there god
+The followers of Em engage in strange practices to say the least. Considered drug addicts by most people, they ritualistically harvest a strange metal that lands throughout the region during the nearly weekly meteor showers throughout the valley; the metal is both used for worship and consumed in a powder to get “closer to Em”. This metal, when consumed, causes the user to have visions and night terrors when sleeping, followed by eventual development of the hive mind and occasional mutations of the body. The visions are considered gifts from their god
 and are heavily studied and followed, leading to occasional unusual group actions in town.